In a recent commentary at M2M Magazine, Peggy Smedley discovered that President Obama has been calling for the advancement of many M2M initiatives. After polling 100 M2M Companies to confirm her understanding that the Smart Grid is in fact an M2M application (why this was not obvious, I do not know), she called on President Obama to avoid plain speech and refer to this technology by it’s “rightful name — M2M”. Mrs. Smedley could not be more wrong, and here is why…
To be fair, Mrs. Smedley falls prey to the same issue that has held back the M2M/Telematics industry for years: we fail to understand the end user’s perspective. This is an easy mistake to make. After all, our industry consists of people who fondly recall slide rules and pocket protectors; we are engineers. We love precise language.
But end users don’t care. Their concern is simply, “How does this impact me?” They have never heard of “M2M” or “telematics”. These words mean nothing to them. Worse, our use of such words is a direct impediment to an understanding of telematics’ value. These words are turn-offs. By using unfamiliar words, two things occur: we make the listener feel ignorant, and communicate that there is much to learn before our message can be understood. Why would anyone endure such learning curve when relevance is uncertain.
I am sure that President Obama’s speechwriters got a healthy laugh from Mrs. Smedley’s phone call educating them on the “rightful name”. They certainly know a core principle of accessible communication is “when not addressing industry insiders, avoid insider terminology”. Working from the White House, they daily use acronyms such as GAO, NCLB, NIH, and of course POTUS, VPOTUS, FLOTUS & SCOTUS. But these acronyms never reside in President Obama’s speeches. Why not? Because no one outside Washington understands them. So, why would any knowledgeable speechwriter assume insider terminology from a third-party industry? They won’t, and they are right not to.
Our industry would do well for itself if we learned from President Obama’s speechwriters. How can we frame our products and services in a way that communicates their value to prospective users? Until we take off our nose-taped spectacles, and try to understand the perspective of our target audience, we will fail to see mainstream adoption.